the fantastic duo
it was me and my duo we landed at a place called volcano and in a game called fortnite we both got a gun but they were both bad like my duo got a green pistol and i just got a grey pistol so we mat up and began our adventure.
we walked up the volcano and if you jump in the volcano you can fly so flyed all the way to loot lake then we saw some fighting so we 3rd party them and me and my duo destroyed them and we just danced and them and they had a rift so we just rifted out of there.
we went to tilted and then we saw heeps of fighting so we 3rd party them and then he knocked me then kayne destroyed them and then i said intent carry
This is a cool story Noah, sounds like a fun game. Maybe next time you could try to write it from the characters point of view, so it sounds more like a recount.
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