Monday, May 13, 2019

My police camp

On Thursday Friday and Saturday i was at a place in Kerikeri called martodi  bay and in the second photo  you can see me sleeping because this was when we were aloud to go home but that was on Saturday and we came in on Thursday and in this first photo was on Saturday and this was the hardest part is standing still   :]

so story comes to and end and enjoy laughing at the photos BY :}
 

14 comments:

  1. Hi Noah its Sheldon nice recount your camp sounded fun:}

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  3. Bonjour Noah, I enjoyed your writing about your police camp. I liked the photos and mostly how you enjoyed it. Don't have much to say but very enoyable, Kind regard - Mia ~

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  4. I am so very pleased that you enjoyed the camp and managed to get some cool photos too. Maybe you could add a bit more detail when recounting a story to include who went, what did you do, why were you involved? (You had when and where covered).

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  5. Kia ora Noah my name is Breeze from Paihia School. I am a year 6 in Te Ngahere. I like the fact that you posted about police camp. It was really interesting. The photo of you sleeping was a bit blurry but I could still see it. I choose this one because I can comment on it more and give some feedback. I liked your post but I think you could add punctuation, full stops and capital letters next time. I look forward to seeing other posts on your blog.

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  6. Kiaora Noah my name is Kingi and I go to Paihia School. I like your post about the Blue Light Camp. you looked like your were very tired on the way back home. But maybe next time you could add some punctuation like full stops and capital letters but other than that it’s good. This reminds me of the time I went to this camp in 2016 Was there a Matua named Ihaka?

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  8. I know Matua Ihaka he was our mentor

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  9. Kia ora Noah, It’s Harlem from Paihia School. I really enjoy your post about the Bluelight Camp because it was a very cool camp. I also really like the second photo because it is really funny you’ve must of been really tired that day. Did you like the camp and all the work that we did ? Did you get sore on the course that we did well see you next time keep up the great work blog you later.

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  10. Noah It's Harlem That camp was Tu Meke

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